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Topic |
Audience |
Purpose |
Trying to get back to their home |
People who are reading it |
To finish the story |
Title of story:
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While exploring an old attic, twins Mia and Jake found a dusty snow globe with a tiny Christmas village inside. When Mia shook it, the snow began to fall—not just inside the globe, but all around them. Suddenly, they were standing in the village. |
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Mia told Jack that everything will be alright. Then they knocked on the door of the closest house and when the door opened they saw a short little elf. The elf said “hello, who are you?” Jack and Mia were surprised to see a real elf. Not like the ones you see on TV. Jack and Mia had to improvise. “We are travelers and we are lost.” Mia said. Then the elf said “Come on in, you must be freezing” The elf gave them warm clothes. Jack was playing with other elves in the snow while Mia and the elf were talking. Mia found out that his name is Elfie and that Mia and Jack are in the north pole. When Jack came in he was smiling. He said “ I just saw Santa!”. Mia ran outside. When she did it wasn’t the small village they were in, it turned out to be the actual north pole. They saw Santa’s Workshop and the Candy Shop. Suddenly Santa walked up to Mia and Jack and asked Elfie who they were. Elfie told him that they are travelers and that they are lost. Then Santa told Elfie to take Mia And Jack to their rooms. Elfie took them to their room where they would stay. It was warm and it had a huge TV, two big beds and LOADS of candy. Elfie said that the candy is actually healthy and it tastes just like the image on it. Soon after Elfie left to help Santa with the presents. Mia felt hungry so she went to the candy side and picked up a candy that had a hot dog image on it and then she ate it and it tasted just like a hot dog. “DELICIOUS” Mia said. Later Jack went to bed, but Mia wanted to explore the place. So she went to look for Elfie (who was finished with the presents). When she found him he was getting the sleigh ready for christmas. Mia suddenly remembered that she and Jack needed to get home. She told Elfie everything and Elfie told Mia to wake Jack up and walk into the Workshop and walk back out. When they did that they found themselves back in the attic. “ What a crazy adventure” Jack said.